• Comment writing task
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  • 17.02.2025
  • Englisch
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Com­ment Wri­ting Prac­ti­ce

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Read the com­ment below, cor­rect all the 25 mista­kes and struc­tu­re the pa­ra­graphs (in­tro­duc­tion, main part with ar­gu­ments, con­clu­si­on)

A dis­cus­sion of the po­si­ti­ve ef­fects of re­ne­wa­ble en­er­gy

Re­ne­wa­ble en­er­gys are be­co­ming in­crea­sin­ly im­portant in are world today. As we face cli­ma­te chan­ge and en­vi­ro­men­tal cha­len­ges, these clean en­er­gy source offer hope for a su­stein­a­ble fu­ture.

Solar power is one of the most po­pu­lar re­ne­wa­ble en­er­gy source. Many coun­trys are in­sta­ling solar pa­nels on rooftops and in large fiel­ds to ge­ne­ra­te elec­tric­ty from the sun. Wind en­er­gy is other gro­wing sec­tor, with wind tur­bi­nes ap­pearing in many rural areas and ofshore lo­ca­ti­ons. These tur­bi­nes har­nes the power of the wind to pro­du­ce clean elec­tric­ty. Hy­dro­pow­er is third ex­amp­le of re­ne­wa­ble en­er­gy, using the force of flo­wing water to ge­ne­ra­te power. Many coun­trys have build dams and hy­dro­elec­tric plants to take ad­van­ta­ge of this re­sour­ce.

These re­ne­wa­ble en­er­gy sources have se­ve­r­al ad­van­ta­ge. They don't pro­du­ces harm­ful emis­sions, hel­ping to re­du­ce air po­lu­ti­on and com­bat cli­ma­te chan­ge. They are also sus­tain­a­ble, as we won't run out of sun­light, wind, or wa­ters. Ad­di­ti­o­nal­ly, re­ne­wa­ble en­er­gy pro­jects crea­te jobs and boost local eco­no­my.

In con­clu­si­on, re­ne­wa­ble en­er­gies are cru­cial for our pla­nets fu­ture. By in­vesting in this clean tech­no­lo­gies, we can work to­wards a more sus­tain­a­ble and en­vi­ro­men­tal­ly fri­end­ly world.



2
Work with a part­ner: Crea­te a ques­ti­on for wri­ting a com­ment in Eng­lish about En­er­gy and the En­vi­ron­ment.
3
Ex­chan­ge your ques­ti­ons with ano­ther group and write an in­tro­duc­tion to the ques­ti­on you re­cei­ved.
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